| Pirates of The Caribbean Mary Sues ( @ 2003-08-17 15:56:00 |
Wooooo boy.
TITLE: Calypso
AUTHOR: IceCoatedHeart
NAME(S): Penelope Black
AFFILIATION: pirate
HAIR COLOR: "truffle colored hair"
EYE COLOR: "lapis lazuli eyes"
SPECIAL POSESSIONS: Some necklace Jack is looking for. Her fingernails can draw blood, for some reason.
HISTORY: Is .. a pirate. Yay?
CONNECTIONS TO CHARACTERS Jack is looking for three legendary pearls, and Penelope has one of them. He and Will (who is playing the side-kick game) get onto her ship and look around for it, but she wakes up and waives a sword around, and so they end up kidnapping her. You know, because that's SO much easier than just killing her and taking her necklace.
NOTES: Besides Miss Black here, there is a secondary Sue named Lainey, who is Jack's little sister. She and Will apparently have a future.
SAMPLE OF THE STORY:
Over-done, flowery descriptions, ahoy!
The sun was just rising over the water when Penelope Black looked out of her small window upon the glittering blue topaz water that gleamed silver under the bright sun. How she longed she could feel the warmth of the water against her skin. The water was choppy that day and tossed her small ship around like a toy in a child's bath, however she didn't rush out of bed, as she trusted her crew.
So, the water is blue, but silver. It's sunny out, and yet, they're caught in a storm. Uhm... riiiight.
As she lay in her bed, she could hear Joshua McAllister stomping around above her and she smiled at the slightly rotted wooden ceiling. Her truffle colored hair was spread over the stiff pillow, she constantly considered cutting it as short as a boys for connivance, but she loved the way the salty wind whipped through it when she let the long tumbling masses down when a storm was coming in.
She tossed uncomfortably in the bed and moaned slightly when the boat gave one particularly ornery heave. She rolled over and set her lapis lazuli eyes on the walls as it creaked against the pressure of the sea.
Lapis lazuli is a gemstone that comes in pale shades of blue, violet, or blue-green. How convenient, she doesn't have to keep a single eye color.
Just take the friggin' necklace, already!
"Well Ms. Black I'll be takin that necklace from you, or I can take it and make you walk the plank" He walked circles around her as she stood with her arms crossed across her chest. "We don't make ladies walk the plank!" Will said to Jack, he spun around on him. "She's a pirate! The bloody pirate will walk the bloody plank whether woman or not!" He pushed out frustrated getting close to Will. "Well you can't have it either way" She spoke calmly they both turned and looked at her.
Hello. Pirate? Sword? Pillage, murder, rape? Any of these ringing a bell? No pirate - not even one with morals - is going to wait until they have PERMISSION to take someone's jewelry.
Jack skimmed a finger across her chest and hooked the silver chain with a rough finger. "Where did you happen to come by this?" He asked and held Penelope's level stare before she gave in and looked down to where Jack's finger still lay against her bronzed flesh. "It was a gift from my great grandfather" She said and raised an eyebrow. "And think what you wish but no amount of money or gold you could offer me would make me give this to you"
Jack shrugged a shoulder. "I would be disappointed if I had heard anything different, but in said case, that means that you will have to stay on this ship, with me and my matey here," He glanced over his shoulder then leaned closer to Penelope. "He's really a mangy puppy, found him wandering Crown Royale's streets, it was very sad" As if to punctuate it, Will threw a small empty wooden barrel at Jack's head and missed by inches.
Crown Royale? He found Will swimming in a big puddle of liquor?
*massively OOC Will warning siren goes off*
"You're going to burn" She said lazily and rubbed her hands over his bare shoulders. His shoulders stiffened. He turned to face her and looked down into her pretty gold eyes. "Thank you," He murmured and offered Lainey a pleasant smile and Lainey observed happily that the smile made his eyes lighten to the color of burnished coins. "Hey," Lainey said softly as she stared up into his eyes. "You're right eye is a little more brown the your left one"
Will laughed and motioned for Lainey to come stand by him on the helm. "How far does the ocean stretch Will?" She asked as she leaned against him companionably as she stared out at the dark cerulean blue water. "As far as you want it to, or that's what my father has always told me" Lainey looked up at him and took in his features against the setting sun which set his sun-glazed skin aglow. 'God he's cute' Lainey thought and smiled brightly when he glanced down at her.
"So how did someone like you become a pirate? Because let me tell you, besides Anamaria we have never had someone like you on the ship before" She laughed and Will adored the way her nose wrinkled slightly when she laughed. "By someone like me do you mean a woman?" When Jack looked down at the wooden planks guiltily Lainey only laughed harder.
"Well what actually started my piracy is Jack. See I had no idea that Jack had actually become the pirate of the infamous Black Pearl until the whole icky business about a year ago. I had told everyone that I was going out to search for gold and such, but what I was really searching for was him" She pointed vaguely over to the cabins. "Gibbs?" Will asked with confusion and Lainey could only stare at him until she realized that he thought she was talking about Mr.Gibbs who was currently dozing upright on the side of Jack's cabin.
"No," She said with a fleeting laugh. "Jack," She clarified and Will smiled sheepishly. "I love my brother William and make no mistake about that, and when he left it was like he took a part of me with him, what's ironic about it all was Jack had said he would be right back, I haven't seen him for almost ten years" She sighed and when she looked up at Will, he was looking at her in such a way that her stomach did a quick flip and tightened uncontrollably.
TITLE: Calypso
AUTHOR: IceCoatedHeart
NAME(S): Penelope Black
AFFILIATION: pirate
HAIR COLOR: "truffle colored hair"
EYE COLOR: "lapis lazuli eyes"
SPECIAL POSESSIONS: Some necklace Jack is looking for. Her fingernails can draw blood, for some reason.
HISTORY: Is .. a pirate. Yay?
CONNECTIONS TO CHARACTERS Jack is looking for three legendary pearls, and Penelope has one of them. He and Will (who is playing the side-kick game) get onto her ship and look around for it, but she wakes up and waives a sword around, and so they end up kidnapping her. You know, because that's SO much easier than just killing her and taking her necklace.
NOTES: Besides Miss Black here, there is a secondary Sue named Lainey, who is Jack's little sister. She and Will apparently have a future.
SAMPLE OF THE STORY:
Over-done, flowery descriptions, ahoy!
The sun was just rising over the water when Penelope Black looked out of her small window upon the glittering blue topaz water that gleamed silver under the bright sun. How she longed she could feel the warmth of the water against her skin. The water was choppy that day and tossed her small ship around like a toy in a child's bath, however she didn't rush out of bed, as she trusted her crew.
So, the water is blue, but silver. It's sunny out, and yet, they're caught in a storm. Uhm... riiiight.
As she lay in her bed, she could hear Joshua McAllister stomping around above her and she smiled at the slightly rotted wooden ceiling. Her truffle colored hair was spread over the stiff pillow, she constantly considered cutting it as short as a boys for connivance, but she loved the way the salty wind whipped through it when she let the long tumbling masses down when a storm was coming in.
She tossed uncomfortably in the bed and moaned slightly when the boat gave one particularly ornery heave. She rolled over and set her lapis lazuli eyes on the walls as it creaked against the pressure of the sea.
Lapis lazuli is a gemstone that comes in pale shades of blue, violet, or blue-green. How convenient, she doesn't have to keep a single eye color.
Just take the friggin' necklace, already!
"Well Ms. Black I'll be takin that necklace from you, or I can take it and make you walk the plank" He walked circles around her as she stood with her arms crossed across her chest. "We don't make ladies walk the plank!" Will said to Jack, he spun around on him. "She's a pirate! The bloody pirate will walk the bloody plank whether woman or not!" He pushed out frustrated getting close to Will. "Well you can't have it either way" She spoke calmly they both turned and looked at her.
Hello. Pirate? Sword? Pillage, murder, rape? Any of these ringing a bell? No pirate - not even one with morals - is going to wait until they have PERMISSION to take someone's jewelry.
Jack skimmed a finger across her chest and hooked the silver chain with a rough finger. "Where did you happen to come by this?" He asked and held Penelope's level stare before she gave in and looked down to where Jack's finger still lay against her bronzed flesh. "It was a gift from my great grandfather" She said and raised an eyebrow. "And think what you wish but no amount of money or gold you could offer me would make me give this to you"
Jack shrugged a shoulder. "I would be disappointed if I had heard anything different, but in said case, that means that you will have to stay on this ship, with me and my matey here," He glanced over his shoulder then leaned closer to Penelope. "He's really a mangy puppy, found him wandering Crown Royale's streets, it was very sad" As if to punctuate it, Will threw a small empty wooden barrel at Jack's head and missed by inches.
Crown Royale? He found Will swimming in a big puddle of liquor?
*massively OOC Will warning siren goes off*
"You're going to burn" She said lazily and rubbed her hands over his bare shoulders. His shoulders stiffened. He turned to face her and looked down into her pretty gold eyes. "Thank you," He murmured and offered Lainey a pleasant smile and Lainey observed happily that the smile made his eyes lighten to the color of burnished coins. "Hey," Lainey said softly as she stared up into his eyes. "You're right eye is a little more brown the your left one"
Will laughed and motioned for Lainey to come stand by him on the helm. "How far does the ocean stretch Will?" She asked as she leaned against him companionably as she stared out at the dark cerulean blue water. "As far as you want it to, or that's what my father has always told me" Lainey looked up at him and took in his features against the setting sun which set his sun-glazed skin aglow. 'God he's cute' Lainey thought and smiled brightly when he glanced down at her.
"So how did someone like you become a pirate? Because let me tell you, besides Anamaria we have never had someone like you on the ship before" She laughed and Will adored the way her nose wrinkled slightly when she laughed. "By someone like me do you mean a woman?" When Jack looked down at the wooden planks guiltily Lainey only laughed harder.
"Well what actually started my piracy is Jack. See I had no idea that Jack had actually become the pirate of the infamous Black Pearl until the whole icky business about a year ago. I had told everyone that I was going out to search for gold and such, but what I was really searching for was him" She pointed vaguely over to the cabins. "Gibbs?" Will asked with confusion and Lainey could only stare at him until she realized that he thought she was talking about Mr.Gibbs who was currently dozing upright on the side of Jack's cabin.
"No," She said with a fleeting laugh. "Jack," She clarified and Will smiled sheepishly. "I love my brother William and make no mistake about that, and when he left it was like he took a part of me with him, what's ironic about it all was Jack had said he would be right back, I haven't seen him for almost ten years" She sighed and when she looked up at Will, he was looking at her in such a way that her stomach did a quick flip and tightened uncontrollably.